Dargquon Ql'deleodna

lol, good job with the poem. i agree with ohewwo you dont need all of the commas. welcome to our big, seprated, not genetially close, talking always family.(took a while ...

im with kay kay, this wil probably turn out well. do you have any estimates as to when you will post more of your story?

okee dokee, ill work on it some more tonight. thanks for the update.

here is a more fleshed out version. Mistakes can Kill They say everybody’s doing it, That it will make you look cool i don't think i can keep this up ...

ill try to put more emotion in it and grip the reader, wish me luck :wink: .

ill think about that, jack. if you dont mind could you give me some pointers as to where i could inlude emotions?

this is a good start, remember to keep in mind how this timothy man will affect her; giving your story an unexpected plot twist around the time when you find ...

wow, thanks :D . i just studied about inertia in scince class(has to do with newton and physics). cool :wink:

you met salvatore :?: :? :? in PERSON :!: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:

fyi: no offense taken, i am always open to comments. i dont consider my writing skills that great so i try to c what people say i ned to improve ...

sounds cool, ill have to check it out,lieraly(from the library)ha ha(not funny). reading the summary made me confused,but your discription helped abit hunter. hunter who is you favorite character? why

i own all but the lone drow, and two swords, but i have read lone drow. i hate obould :evil: , i mean he is pure evil :!: :!: . ...

they are awsome, i stayed up until 12:00 :shock: :shock: to finish the 3rd book :wink:. i am exausted, but it was definatly worth the time. higley reccomed that everone ...

let me tell you all of the books i have read that either had drizzit in it or were related to drizzit in an important way: 1. Dark elf trilogy: ...